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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2000-08-13 03:13 PM


Were you most awake
The day god
Told you to die?

Do you remember
The exact color
Of the sky?

Was life to you
One big mistaken
Lie?

The day god
Told you
To die?

Did you
Have trouble in
Meeting his eye?

Did you
Remember to
Wear a tie?

Did you
Eat a big piece of
Mud-cigarette pie?

The day god
Told you
To die?

Did yr
Lost love make
You cry?

Were you
Afraid but did
Not know why?

Was a dove's imprint
Suspended in
The sky?

The day god
Told you
To die?

Did you yet again
Forget how to
Cry?

Did you yet again
Forget how to
Sigh?

Did you forget again
To remember yr
Goodbye?

The day god
Told you
To die?

Did you
Remember to
Ask her why?

Did you think
Of remembered pleasure
Down yr thigh?

Did you ever question
His or her
Eye?

The day god
Told you
To die.


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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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1 posted 2000-08-13 11:14 PM


Watching our lives pass before us you say?  Some provocative thoughts here for sure...
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-08-14 07:06 PM


I've had a day like that before...but you know me, I flipped an indiscreet finger and said "no way..."  more food for thought, tho, courtesy of me favorite squirrel...
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