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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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"LifeDreams" When my mind's eye, takes your words into consideration, after the passage of time, the moments weaken in thought, from the past memories, and I then struggle to understand, your meanings, which are sometimes lost to me. I touch the words as they escape my lips, I taste their sweetness, and feel my chest rise, as I exhale a sigh. Touched when you are touched, Watching your words appearing, wondering if they are meant for me, or all eyes on here... And when I write my words I am hoping that to you, all of you there is an understanding, a feeling of sameness, knowing that at one time in the past... or maybe come the future, if not today, that you feel just a touch of what I feel, taste the sweet or bitterness of my day, and leave with my words knowing that we are all "one" in this world, and each word spills over, forming a river flowing into an even wider ocean of thoughts. M 7*2k |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
MMoonchild, A story you tell with this writing of yours, and very nicely done. Very nice indeed. |
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Richard McDonald Junior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 29Queensland, Australia |
For all to be one is an admirable idea to hold to. And to gain an understanding of how this could be done is somewhat impossible. I love your poem and the deep feelings expressed. Thank-you. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Bill, I was in a very contemplative mood today..and wrote this in response to a french poem written to me elsewhere..thank you for your sweet comments ~~softly Maureen [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 07-31-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Richard I am happy you stopped by and read.. ~~softly Maureen |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
each word spills over, forming a river flowing into an even wider ocean of thoughts. ...... Contemplative indeed! Ah such thoughts when they occur, its best to put them to words so that they then become reminders and pointers to lead this life... great work, Maureen... regards, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 08-01-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Sudhir thank you for your wonderful comments..and I didn't respond to my "Holding Back" as I am trying to move it to the adult forum... ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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EWDrake Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 183NC, USA |
Maureen, you summed up the fledgling hope of every poet... And when I write my words I am hoping that to you, all of you there is an understanding Wonderful write, m'lady, Evan |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
This is deep.....and very good....It has a message,,,,I liked it.....So hard to get messages across sometimes....you did good!!!  Julie :) |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Evan..thank you very much..I can always count on you for a thoughtful response ~~softly Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
JulieAnn..if even the tiniest message or enjoyment occurs then it was worth the write ~~softly Maureen |
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courtney923 Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 43 |
I've read a few of your poems and they are really good. I'll be looking forward to more. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
courtney923 thank you for such a nice compliment ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You have a remarkable talent for flow, the poem speaks intead of needing to be read, if you understand what I mean. The words "speak" it's the most wonderful kind of poem, in my opinion. Kathleen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kathleen..you are making me work hard tonight on responses *teasing you..yes I have been told I have my own style and flow..in fact I have tried to disguise my name sometimes and still they know it's me behind the mask ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
your replies "speak" to me also, Kathleen..thank you ~~soft smiles M |
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