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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Carouse you fields wake to the light sending color through your white and black monotone, monochrome existence dreary, nevermore now awakening to new birth slowly at first then spinning faster as the melody takes control, imbuing everything with saturated vitality gleaming from the corners dust swept away with the victorious, voracious sun glimmers of promise are whispered in the air motes dancing with expectation as buds open. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ What a refreshing sound of spring. Nice images pop into my mind. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wonderful imagery, Kethry... lovely work... regards, sudhir |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Kethry - What delightful images of spring you have brought with your pen. This is just lovely. Bonnie |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
my first read at your work, Kethry ... this is poetry ... unpredictable style ... My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I love the way spring unfolds under your pen, the suddeness of change and burst of color, and your poem says it all. Very unique decription and a very refreshing read Liz |
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