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No, I Never Dreamed (such as this) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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How do I tell you What I feel in my heart When there just Are no words to explain? I just go crazy Every minute we're apart From our first kiss to last All of those mem'ries remain To say that I love you Is just not enough My feelings run so Much deeper you see Living here lonely Without you is tough But for now that's The way it has to be You take me places That I've never been And some I never knew Could exist No, I never dreamed That I would end up Knowing true love Such as this I give you my love And undying attention with the hope that One day you'll do the same Just one other thing I wanted to mention Please don't ever say That this is all just a game When you said I love you That's all it took Now, my heart Belongs to only you To hold you again Forward - I look Nothing on this Earth That I'd rather do Cos... You take me places That I've never been And some I never knew Could exist No, I never dreamed That I would end up Knowing true love Such as this ************************ Another one for YOU  [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 08-10-2000).] |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
this flows great...the honesty and emotion shine through...nice work!  Tony |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thanks T - man Honesty? Oh you have no idea just how much honesty there is in this one This is another one for that special someone in my life  [This message has been edited by Jeffrey Carter (edited 08-10-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Jeffrey, This one shines from the heart... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeffrey~ When your heart smiles ... your poetry smiles ! Lovely thoughts ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Jeffrey I think you did a pretty good job of laying your love on the line...James |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
There is such truth in your poem. And truth always finds a way out doesn't it? (smile) I enjoyed this very much. Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You know I know my friend...beautifully written |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, me thinks "You" is one lucky woman |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Sudhir, Don't it though Marge, Well, my heart is smiling very, very big these days when it comes to love  James, My heart is in the palm of her hand my friend Kay-lynn, Thank you....this is very much the way I feel....and that's the whole truth Paula, You don't know "everything" you think you do  Ruth, No, I am the lucky one!!! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
wow! mr. cassanova!!!whoo-who! gotta love these romantic love poems my man!!! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A beautiful poem of love. Corinne |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Oh my friend, how in love you are........This was so honset and from the heart of which you wear on your sleeve and I respect that more then I can tell you. Feelings are ment to be expressed and you do it so well. I loved the flow by the way.......I hope life and love flow right on back to you.... Jenn E |
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