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Does he see me now?
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Does he see me now? |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN 
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If my father could see me now what would he say? would he let me sit on his lap at my age? Would he look at me like I was his little girl would I be everything in his world? If my father could hear me now what would he say? would he sit in front and clap front & center stage? Would he tell me that I remind him of an angel and no matter how big I got I'd still be his little girl? If my father could hold me now what would he say would he say that's he's so proud I grew up this way? Would he put his arms around me with a grin on his face? if my father could see me now if my father had wanted to see me I wonder if he sees me now *** ps. all fathers.. away from their daughters... we need you badly!.. Every girl needs a daddy so they know true unconditional love. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very hard-hitting words here, red.....with a good message. |
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Majestic Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 264houston, tx. |
very nice poem here... it made me want to wake my daughter up and give her a hug... thanks for heartfelt poem... "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Ohhhhhh....Kay-lynn.......This is sooooooo very deep and touching.......I just wish I could see my kids.....wife is refusing to let me at least until we go to court.......My heart goes out to you |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
What a beautiful message here, one I agree with. Both parents together or not, need to be involved in their childrens live. Enjoyed this. Jenn E |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
that was a beautiful poem.. very emotional. I hear your words.. though I don't have the exact same situation. Wonderful job.  "The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper." Eden Phillpotts *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I can assure you he would do and be all that and more. A daughter holds the highest place in a daddy's heart. And she will surely always be his little girl. Now I have to get some Kleenex. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
bump |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Beautifully done... Makes me think of my Uncle David, whom I have never met. ~Artistic~ |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
My dad is gone, I dont want to miss him cos I spent my life doing that. But I still miss ... well .. poem says what I miss. (sigh) Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
redwriter, How touching this poem is. My father has been there in my life.. physically. I used to spend weekends with him, but we never really communicated or had a relationship. I'm glad to say in my early 20's, we reconnected and`now have a strong bond (I'm 26). I thank God everyday for that This poem makes me want to call him and tell him how happy I am he is in my life and how much I love him.rosepetals [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 08-10-2000).] |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
ohhhh boy (sigh).. well don't let me stop you!!! Pick up the phone! And thank you for leaving me such a sweet and tender note. Kay-lynn Kay-lynn **A dream is a wish your heart makes :) |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
Ouch what a sad poem. You write it so well with such passionate confusion...nice piece redwriter1 |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
It's amazing what words can do. Help and haunt you... |
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