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Pretense.... pages you |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii 
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Pretense pages you, in my walking eyes by the bloomed blue morning, locked in linger's, cocked aged land. Barefoot in the dew, I remembered I have time. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
...in my walking eyes ... Barefoot in the dew, I remembered I have time ------ lovely... very lovely.. in a short space, so profound a thought... and so open to interpretion... you must be a poet then... redheart... regards to you, sudhir |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Indeed, a poet she is... love the dreamy quality you evoke, redheart...more misty photographs...beautiful! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
redheart..... "I remembered I have time" Oh, yes, this was lovely....I agree with all the above statements!!! I have but one goal in life....... Not to have just 1 goal in life!! ! ~~ Sunny ~~ ! |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
thank you all, kindly received and kindly motivating. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
A lovely and comact poem you have here. I notice that you seemed to have written this piece in some kind of set formation... whatever it is, you've executed it well. Nathan |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
very beautiful...nice short and simple style. salooma |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You know I like this poem and I'm not sure exactly why...perhaps the flow...perhaps the message...I do know that I appreciate women that have time to socialize...is that what this poem is about...James |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
nate dog- there is never a set formation for wheen i write, it's always out there and consitent of its self and my make shift imagination, thanxs for thinking it lovely. salooma- thank you. james- to tell you the truth i spend most of my time alone or with my small family, though things are changeing and i think i will be socializing more soon. thank you. serentiy-thank you dear lady, i'll be checking in soon. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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