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Nikolette Sadness
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0 posted 2000-08-07 03:22 AM


again another inspired by the lose of him...

~Visions~

visions that i'm seeing
not knowing what i'm feeling
wishing to know something
just wanting to know one thing
to know the one that loves me
to find someone to touch me

visions in my head
rewinding in my mind
thinking i've seen something
yet knowing love is blind

feelings that i should feel
dealing with how to deal
stealing your heart away
feeling your heart's dismay

visions that i look for
wanting just to find more
watching for anything
not knowing what my want will bring

trying to find nothing
looking hard for something
Deasperation at its best
when i find it i will rest
and that will be my death.

Nikolette Sadness


i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

© Copyright 2000 Nicole Crisp - All Rights Reserved
David D
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since 2000-08-06
Posts 19

1 posted 2000-08-07 03:31 AM


I really liked your poem.  I could take it and apply it to some of my feelings.  I hope the sadness fade though.
Nikolette Sadness
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2 posted 2000-08-07 12:39 PM


thanx david...i'm glad you liked it...loddy dodi da...

*jeremiah*dreamy*

Nik

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

Jenn E
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since 2000-08-02
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Kelowna, BC, Canada
3 posted 2000-08-07 01:01 PM


I can feel the loss and confusion of it all here. I hope your heart heals one day.Why does love have to hurt so much?
Take Care
Jenn E

Nikolette Sadness
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4 posted 2000-08-07 01:11 PM


why does anything hurt?

because its there...and thats its purpose

Nik Sad

i was once in love and happy...but you can call me Sadness.

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