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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-08-06 01:34 PM


Passionate Friends

I have been overwhelmed by the responses of "friends"
Have been answering, teasing, with words that I've penned.
My clocks not in tune now, my hours turned 'round
So I went to sleep early and this morning I found

Many more emails alerting me to
Many more poets warm words to review.
I did my best wanting, to respond just a bit
To the expressions of others, to enjoy what was writ.

Then I came across one, couldn't be meant for me.
Must have another Moonchild, that's it, had to be.
But the curiosity caught and I had to check in..
Oh My! What I found...darn..made tears flow again.

I can do that so easily, when touched by you "all"
Whether happy or sad..they are partial to me and fall.
But I'm so ..I don't  know..at a loss to express
How you've made me so welcomed, and how very impressed

I have become with the warmth, the closeness, the feel
Of a group of fine poets, that charm reel to real.
Hearts on their sleeves, their movies of words
I feel them, am touched by...every emotion incurred.

Liz, I must thank you, I am not even sure
What has brought this about, but the feelings are pure
Of the happy you've made me and the warm felt inside
I am trying to share all my feelings that I hide.

And to all of you here, who've responded in thread
I am greatful to all, and am blushing faced red.

~~hugs~~ to you everyone...especially Liz
Maureen
Moonchild

* and I can't tell you how much I have enjoyed being here...thank you ALL from the deep within my heart and soul



[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-06-2000).]

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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 2000-08-06 02:46 PM




Blush if you must
but it's really quite true
I'm enjoying the poetry
that's coming from you!

This is lovely, Maureen, and I thank you, in earnest, for the sweet gifting of your words.


~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


MMoonchild
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2 posted 2000-08-06 02:57 PM


sighhhhhhh
Claire...thank you again...

~~soft smiles
Maureen

Martie
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3 posted 2000-08-06 03:11 PM


:
:  Opps, was trying to make one of those rolling smiles here, sigh....LOL.  Your poetry is wonderful and so are you!

[This message has been edited by Martie (edited 08-06-2000).]

Martie
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4 posted 2000-08-06 03:16 PM


oops!  
Bill Charles
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5 posted 2000-08-06 04:47 PM


Hi Maureen,
What a beautiful way to say thank you. You have it Maureen, a poet beyond poets. When did you say the next one was arriving?

Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2000-08-06 05:00 PM


What a wonderful poem Maureen!  

Within these walls, one can find
sympathy, empathy, passion, compassion, and
just ... plain old love. It's a wonderful place!

So glad you joined us here and became a part of this world!  

Best wishes,
/Kit


[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 08-06-2000).]

ethome
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7 posted 2000-08-06 05:15 PM


Aw Maureen you're blushing ain't you the cutest little thing.....dry those eyes now and listen to uncle ethome......

we love ya and ya know we really do
that's why it's so nice when we hear from you.
your words from the heart are always so true
when you're feeling sad then we are too
but when you're happy like you are today
then we are happy to see you that way.
So pull up a chair and kick off your shoes
and sit right down and write from your muse
cause the things you've been writing are simply the best
and if we did'nt hear from you we would'nt rest.

wonderful answer to Elizabeth's poem to you..
take care sweet poet lady

[This message has been edited by ethome (edited 08-06-2000).]

Denise
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8 posted 2000-08-06 08:01 PM


This place is special, isn't it?! The people here are wonderful! Lovely poem!  

Denise

MMoonchild
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9 posted 2000-08-06 08:23 PM


Martie...you are doing better than I ... I want to  use a  colon all the time and I would get a weird green mean face...hey it won't do it now,  hmmmmmmm...oh well I will give you a nice one instead  
~~softly smiling
thank you
Maureen



[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-06-2000).]

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
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10 posted 2000-08-06 08:36 PM


Maureen
How gracious and lovely this response to all the poets. The passions family is blessed by your poetry and your friendship.
Keep those great verses coming
Love
Liz

MMoonchild
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11 posted 2000-08-06 08:37 PM


Bill ...the next will be arriving after midnight I am dueting I think  in the adult  forum..and I have posted 2 in the dark passions #2 if you want to look...I can't remember if you go there or not...
~~soft hugs
Maureen

MMoonchild
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12 posted 2000-08-06 09:19 PM


thank you soooo much kit I am enjoying every moment here
~~soft smiles
Maureen

MMoonchild
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13 posted 2000-08-06 10:00 PM


ethome...you all have just been sooo nice I feel like it's my birthday  even though it isn't and all your words are the presents I never received
~~soft hugs E.
Maureen


MMoonchild
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14 posted 2000-08-06 10:09 PM


Denise..this is a very special   place...yes and thank you
~~soft smiles
Maureen

MMoonchild
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15 posted 2000-08-07 12:23 PM


Liz, once again I thank you for making my day so wonderful
~~soft {{hugs}}
Maureen

Professor Gloom
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16 posted 2000-08-07 05:53 AM


I enjoy the way you have blend everyday
with poetry to make a simple Thanks
into artwork.
Another Well Done,

Gloom

MMoonchild
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17 posted 2000-08-07 06:39 AM


thank you Professor...always something to learn on here isn't there
~~soft smiles
M

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