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Hello There Obligation..............
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Hello There Obligation.............. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
The sun has embed Dim moonlight is shining Reflection of your love envelops me, guiding..... to a venue of completness that starts with wanting lips familiar yearning grows within as we move to lovers bliss Oneness is imminent, eyes are locked frozen in lover's stare There I can see heaven baby and am blinded by it's glare Here I am in true love's embrace where Iv'e always wanted to be and the there it is a knock on the door from obligation saying, "You have to leave." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oneness is imminent, eyes are locked frozen in lover's stare There I can see heaven baby and am blinded by it's glare Here I am in true love's embrace where Iv'e always wanted to be and the there it is a knock on the door from obligation saying, "You have to leave." ==================== oh how well i know... you write my heart in this poem... which is well written .. lovely in its sensual emotions... honest in its reality... and reality bites ...how well we know ..right.  take care jm |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Janet, It means so much to me, your reply's. It warms the heart to know that someone else out there understands. Yes, reality does bite doesn't it!! You say I write your heart in this poem........man oh man, for me to express anything you feel I take as the highest of compliments. Thank You for being you!  Jenn E |
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David D Junior Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 19 |
I really liked , and could really relate. WOW |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Thanks David.....appreciate the WOW!!! Jenn E |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
"Here I am in true love's embrace Where Ive always wanted to be and then there it is a knock on the door from obligation saying, "you have to leave." " i have lived these words...I agree with Janet Marie, sensual and honest. Very well done..I'll be looking for more! ~Dawn whatcha doing in this darkness baby when you know love will set you free? will you stay in the sea forever Drowning there for all eternity? ~Live |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Oneness is imminent, eyes are locked frozen in lover's stare There I can see heaven baby and am blinded by it's glare Here I am in true love's embrace where Iv'e always wanted to be and the there it is a knock on the door from obligation saying, "You have to leave." Never is this easy when we want it to be the most....honest as you know....sensibility and love mixed seldom take us to where we wish we were. Loved it and your style and format were great. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I like this piece... it was lovely and well-written. Thanks for sharing. Nathan |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
i loved it! i can't really quote any part except those VERY powerful last 2 lines... great writing Jenn... hope it's a fading obligation! Tony |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Well done turth, very sensory and real. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
The more of your work that I read JennE the more than I am touched....this speaks volumes Oligation often calls at that moment we need the escape most....excellent writing~ |
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