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Simple Blues |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Too simple. Just a click away. Too simple. Wish it all away. simple love leave simple bruise-- simple heart, (beats) Simple Blues. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
and this is "simply" lovely! i have to wish though that my blues were simple! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Simplicity in it's finest.....those clicks just seem to gather more power as they go on don't they...wonderful verse and alot said in so few simple words..  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I had to look in on this one when I saw that title. Great one Serenity simple but effective....maybe we'll end up calling you the Louisiana Lyric Lady.... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Serenity, a simple yet very well written poem. SOunds great when read aloud. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
serenity... This is simplicity at it's finest!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you guys for humoring me on this, it is actually a song---or a piece of one, anyway...and brian, it sounds great with a bass line in D---thanks to all, once again. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
simple words simple rhyme simple hearts doing time... simple simple simple mine...  *sigh*(of complacentcy) so simple yet so complicated... if only the hearts bruises healed as simply as a click to make em leave... you know... i know... lalalala sing the blues baby. ('ill e ya about the poem...looking for me muse)  moody damn muse *winkie winkie* me |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
If it were that simple many of us wannabe's could have penned it...lol Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
So well captured without really having to say much. You have created much complicity with this one. Tahnks Rich |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I like it very much, serenity. The carefully chosen words, the line breaks, the complex meaning simply told.....it's excellent. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
A simple friend with simple taste Extraordinary find As simple ties bind simple friends Simply or something like that |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
S'en, All hail the poetry queen! Reading poetry like this makes me wish I had more time to read poetry like this. Much love.Mike |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
serenity, a simple design gives the reader more room for reflection...this is lovely. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
just popping in to say "thanks" had fun with this one...love the blues, I do, I do... now where is that Etta James? Much appreciation to all of you. I'm off to read.... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
want me to play the drums??? serenity.. this is cool... way too cool where is the rest of it now? regards, sudhir |
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