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Time Stands Still
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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Time Stands Still Time stands still, one's thoughts so pure. No deeper love, awaits for thee. To come and sweep, to lift up high, One's love filled heart, now overflows. Where art thou, one, of equal need? For love, hath never want, so dear. Time stands still, one's thoughts so pure. No deeper love, awaits for thee. What doest one view, through door, so wide? Thy presence shines a light, again. Thou sweeps and lifts towards heaven's bliss. Two hearts, now share, the love doest flow. Time stands still, one's thoughts so pure. No deeper love, awaits for thee. Maureen *99 |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
This is truely beautiful Maureen ... I hope he finds you  Rex |
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courtney923 Junior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 43 |
Wow! This poem is amazing, and I love it. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Maureen, this is incredibly beautiful..... |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Rex, thank you very much for the kind words.. ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Courtney this is a Rondel Prime ..a form of structured poetry...I learned on another site last year where there were many challenges and this was one of my favorites..the url for his teaching site is this http://woods.bianca.com/shacklet/the_biki you may enjoy learning some of the patterns of poetry..I love the challenges of it ~~soft thanks for the comments Maureen |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Maureen, What can I say... beautiful as usual rosepetals25 |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
(im going to check out that website youve just recommended to courtney) and i'll just repeat what everyone else is saying....this IS truly beautiful! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I am going to check out the site also, thank you. I'm always looking for different types of poetry, free verse, blank verse, this seemed to be a very natural one for you, even if you worked on it, it really flowed. I loved it. Kathleen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Balladeer such praise from you definitely widens my smile today And Rosepetals...again thank you for the nice compliment ~~smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Princess and Kathleen..yes that is just a teaching site with examples..they may do that here... I haven't investigated all the poetry forums on here yet...but I have spent a year on a much smaller site called Kaleidoscopes which you can get from checking the one I posted...a small but friendly group whom I met 10 of in VA..this spring...for a poets weekend.. thank you both Maureen |
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