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courtney923
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since 2000-07-30
Posts 43


0 posted 2000-08-03 10:46 AM


Walking along, this time of grim
Sun behind my head, but it's still dim
Waiting for the light, to shine in
Overcast by shadows, and life with sin
Pain would be less, if stabbed with a pin
Caressing my troubles, with scotch and gin
Giving me more reason, to break from it
My life is crazy, and full of it
In time I'll tire, and leave the sh*t
Or maybe crawl inside, a big pit
Just for a while, I think I'll sit
Pondering some way, or an exit

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-08-03 02:06 PM


Ooh my - quit drinking
and get out there
and enjoy the





Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
2 posted 2000-08-03 03:19 PM


Yep Courtney heed to sunshine's advice.... enjoy the ray of light....

well written work here...

regards,
sudhir

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