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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
EnhancedI found within cascading thoughts immersed in sun while shadows danced a need to speak, in candid course of how, through you, my life's enhanced Our love of words, an honest art, when weaving worlds of verse and rhyme This blessing has befallen us and shan't depart before its time For friendship grows with every laugh and every teardrop draws us nigh We've had bestowed a gracious gift of treasured trust in vast supply So take my tender hand in yours and we will talk into the night to share the contents of our hearts and travel miles before the light |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
My life has definitely been enhanced reading your poems, my friend... What a beautiful way to write... For friendship grows with every laugh and every teardrop draws us nigh We've had bestowed a gracious gift of treasured trust in vast supply GREAT... regards, sudhir |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I like to read your poetry MM...very good...  it reminds me alot of the way my creative writing teacher wrote....nice work..!Julie :) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Claire beautiful poem, I loved the flow of words...excellent. "I have penned epitaphs on snow, and written my legacy in dust." self quote. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Your style is so soothing...gentleness as your trademark...poetic gossamer, every time. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sudhir, my word, what a lovely thing to say to a person. Thank you, my friend. Julie, thank you! My first creative writing professor in college was the person who, above all else, put it into my mind that perhaps I might be able to write. A remarkable man, a poet laureate, to whom I will always be grateful. Brian, I read a BEAUTIFUL poem of yours today! The one for your friend, Alan. Still loving that one, my friend. Thanks for reading this, it comes directly from my heart. serenity, "poetic gossamer" sounds so nice...thank you, in earnest, for your ever encouraging notes here. I'm glad you enjoyed this one...I enjoyed composing it. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such beautiful sentiments of poetic comraderie Claire ... I'm taken again, by the flow and exquisite wording throughout this beautiful poem. Just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Claire--Such a loving and peaceful walk in friendhship's house...I am always left enriched by your words. |
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Jaysun C Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 56 |
muse- I like the part about traveling miles into a relationship over a nite of conversation. this poem makes me happy thank you =)(= |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Claire, What a lovely way you have of describing friendship. This person is very fortunate to have a friend such as yourself. Take care, Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
beautiful poem Claire...I do not think what you pen has much to have with a creative writing class... one cannot teach the gift you have. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Kit, thank you. The camaraderie that I've written of truly is poetic in its nature. Thank you so much for thinking such nice things about this piece. Martie, as I am yours, my friend. Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this. Jaysun, thank you very much...your response to this poem makes ME happy! Michael, when the friendship is this lovely, describing it is effortless. It is my good fortune to have this friend in my life. Thank you, sincerely, for your thoughts. Mike, you're a treasure...thank you, my friend. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Beautiful! Just beautiful! You have such a marvelous talent. This could be me writing to my husband, and I couldn't have said it better. Thank you for lending me words to express my heart. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ You write with ease of friendship's inspirtion ... your friend is to be applauded for having the good grace to sit counsel of thought with you. 'For friendship grows with every laugh and every teardrop draws us nigh' Wonderful, poetess of beauty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You have such a delicate way with words Claire...true elegance. I really admire your writing you know. K"He looked across the silky surface of the Severn... it was a famously difficult river with fierce tides..." From Jack Maggs |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
"So take my tender hand in yours and we will talk into the night to share the contents of our hearts and travel miles before the light" these lines spoke to me - so beautifully, so softly - 'twas like an angel's kiss |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi MM, The way you express a thought N feeling in2 a verse and present same on screen just leaves this reader sighing and smiling... A beautiful poem indeed Coco |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Rosemary, if your husband is this kind of friend to you (and yes, I know he is!) then you are so very blessed. As am I, for your taking time to let me know how much you enjoyed reading this. Thank you so much. Miss Marge, I thank you, sincerely, for your gracious commentary. You "do" say the sweetest things! Kamla, my humblest of thanks to you, my friend. Bill, what tender thought you've expressed...thank you. Coco, your sighs and smiles have inspired the same from me... thank you! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Truly my friend, a walk with you would be an excursion into the heart. . . Simply beautiful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
loved it..simply beautiful.. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sven, my friend...such moving words this morning, and I must thank you, sincerely, for them. Victoria, thank you very much for taking time to let me know you read and enjoyed this. I so appreciate your kindness. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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