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Change in the Winds |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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passions turned blue promises untrue so many people giving in just living to find an anwswer to a hypothetical question hypicrites among us dragging us down pulling us under nobodys perfect baby how did that dirt taste when you swallowed it down chase it down to your stomach did it leave a rotten taste in your mouth? do you like the way it makes you feel? how long? does it go on? how long before? you heal your head? self destructing your soul too much pain... no way to let go... and how much did you sell you soul for? where did it start? do you really want it to end? has your life lost all of it's magic? find all of your troubles hidden behind the door but you've got it all together holding on with both hands i don't think i've scratched the surface of what goes on in your mind and i think your running out of time your demons catching up with you start saying your prayers and pray one more time that he heard you will he listen? and save you from yourself? the river is getting rough it is all down stream better hope for a change in the winds.... hopeing it will blow away all of your sins... lost in the music... and you asked me to help you don't you know... you have to want it baby... can't give you what you need... you can't be free through me... now your feeling like all is lost to you not quite sure what to do living on your dreams another dose of unreality and i won't be your new drug... can't be a substitute another way to heal the pain still everyday the same 'ol thing giving in again and again finding another reason to blacken yor soul believing it's gonna make you whole i think your delusional yea, it can make you that way walking somewhere down the middle and it's a dangerous place to be do you know what your looking for? strung up...down and out tell me of all your mistakes too much for you to live with all the regrets so you live in your fantasy clouded eyes clouded mind won't make you heart pure... and i won't be your cure... and i think your running out of time your demons catching up with you start saying your prayers and pray one more time that he heard you will he listen? and save you from yourself? the river is getting rough and it's all down stream better hope for a change in the winds.... hopeing it will blow away all of your sins... < !signature--> Julie  [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 09-13-2000).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
F A N T A S T I C W R I T I N G |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
POWERFUL WORK... Wow, JulieAnn, you have a tremendous flair for writing... regards, sudhir |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Thank you CoCo......I am trying to work on some stuff for a friend and I....he is a musician....so maybe I can get some music behind some of my stuff now!! Thanks for reading and I am glad you liked it!! Sud.... you are too kind!! I am glad you liked it and thank you for reading....  < !signature-->Julie [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 09-13-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I thought I heard a bass drum pounding...loved the "in your face" style of this Juli, well done! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A deluge of emotions, phew.... so much to try and take in, excellent writing. "I have penned epitaphs on snow, and written my legacy in dust." self quote. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
serenity~~thanks for reading and replying...glad you liked it..... Brian~~~i am glad you enjoyed it....coming from such a talented person I am flattered... Julie :) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed it a lot |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WOW.....this one has so much power in it.......loved this one much my friend |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Vandana~~Tahnx for stopping to read and reply... Mark~~gald you enjoyed....i have gotten a new muse i guess....new inspiration...thank you ... Julie :) |
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