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Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
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Wilmington, Delaware

0 posted 2000-09-11 05:06 PM



No woman has ever
Reduced me to jelly
Trembling, pleading
Torn with passion
As you and your sweet words do,
Don't make me beg
Come to me, feel my pores
Gushing the pheromones
I cannot control
Hear the prayer my constricted throat
Rasps out to you

In your heart,
Sense my lips, burning your flesh
Sense my eyes ravishing your soul
And feel the palpable
Pounding of my own

Let me immerse myself in you
Savoring your sweetness
Lapping as I would candy cane

Join your lips to mine
Use your arms to share
With me the glory of an embrace
From tip to toe.

And should you share
The overwhelming joy I feel
The insatiable love growing
Constantly within my heart
Join with me in a union
That, were it seen,
Would be the envy
Of all lovers throughout time

For I want us
To share our love



[This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 09-11-2000).]

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Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-09-11 05:11 PM


Beautiful heartfelt words and me thinks she will be a sayin yeppers to ya real soon.  Excellent penning.
Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2000-09-11 07:08 PM


The subject of your poetry must be dancing in the winds. It is truly so beautiful.
Liz

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2000-09-11 07:20 PM


Wil, I thought for a little bit this was gonna get booted to adult, it was soooo then you went and made it a sweet as

you you.

Be well
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Martie
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4 posted 2000-09-11 07:23 PM


Bill--Such passion sings from your words...I think it is palpable.
Wilfred Yeats
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Wilmington, Delaware
5 posted 2000-09-11 10:59 PM


Mark -

This medium -is one of words - some say the substance can't be felt - yet I feel - and I try - Thank you


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Wilfred Yeats
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Wilmington, Delaware
6 posted 2000-09-11 11:06 PM




Liz-

Why should only I be dancing?   Thank you

~What! No star, and you are going out to sea?
Marching, and you have no music?
Traveling, and you have no book?  
What!  No love, and you are going out to live?

                ~ French Proverb ~

wilfredyeats@hotmail.com                 


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Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
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Wilmington, Delaware
7 posted 2000-09-11 11:19 PM


Kethry -

Would I do that?   - not a like me  

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware
8 posted 2000-09-11 11:23 PM


Martie -

"palpable" is one of my favorite Words  - Thank you  

~We are all born for love; it is the principle of existence and
its only end.

              ~ Benjamin Disraeli ~

wilfredyeats@hotmail.com                 


[This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 09-12-2000).]

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