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The Lonely Stranger
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA

0 posted 2000-09-08 11:17 AM


--- So Far Away ---

Distance breaks so many hearts.
They and their loves, so far apart.

But fortunate are those who pine.
There's never been a love called mine.

Their love is gone, so far away.
But I am lonely every day.



Some men see things as they are and ask "WHY ?" I see things as they could be and ask "WHY NOT ?"

© Copyright 2000 Gerald H. Monroe - All Rights Reserved
Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
1 posted 2000-09-08 12:42 PM


so beautiful, and so true how we often feel so alone in a world filled with so many people yet distance seems to drag us apart, Open your heart and let it sing and this I know releases pain. Nice to read keep it up!
poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
2 posted 2000-09-08 12:54 PM


dont worry, you will find love...it just falls in your lap when you arent looking...this is a lovely poem....be patient and keep your heart open and it will happen!


"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
3 posted 2000-09-08 02:04 PM


Heart felt longing within your weave...it was felt in every lovely word~
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