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Hot Desert Night - Kethry's Lament
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Hot Desert Night - Kethry's Lament |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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While camping in the desert Kethry woke in fright Only to discover the Wondrous desert night The stars were glistening brightly The moon an argent glow Shining on the desert sand for dwellers, here below the scent of desert wildflowers as they waved in gentle breeze the glory of the desert brought me up upon my knees the night was softly warming the breeze was heaven sent and what does all this beauty mean It mean's someone stole my tent. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
COOL  IDEA!!!ROFL....  --btw great poem with nice imagery... regards, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 09-06-2000).] |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
and here i was imagining this beautiful place of subtle natural romance...and then you hit me with the punchline...oh girl..this is too much!! ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
ROTFLMAO...wunnerful simply wunnerful... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I admit I stole your tent, I'll be back for the rest. The next thing you'll be missing, Is the hair upon your chest. What? You don't have any hair, Upon your smooth and gentle swell? Hmmppph, somebody's been there already. I hope you gave him hell! Neato poem, Ms Kethry. I enjoyed the surprise ending. psst, it's OK to have some hair, Upon your lovely breasts. But if you let it grow too long, You'll soon have a varmit nest! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I thank everyone else, this is for Long John, As a child I ate my crusts the rest of it you guess although I have the regular busts I have hair upon my chest I had some hair upon my chest been there, done that if you please I had to get them waxed because the critters gave me fleas. Kethry  < !signature-->"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 09-07-2000).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
well now that's OUT back!! lol@Kethry... nice..  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
ha ha.. love that last line .. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This poem is so in tents!! Love your style, keth |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hehe Great one Kethry! Loved it! And the surprising ending! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Local Rebel. Thanks and watch out I looking for victim material. Victoria. Thank you so much Balladeer, I knew you'd appreciate the poem's in-tent-city. LM Whatever gave you the idea the ending would be conventional. At least this poem's not cute. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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