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Loving Plea
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Loving Plea |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle 
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Loving Plea < !signature-->Gather me in your arms, let your warmth flow through my being. No words needed, eyes closed and unseeing~ only feeling. Hold my hand tight when I need the connection.... When life's troubles are too great and rejection may be deciding my fate. Listen avidly when I voice deepest fears without prejudice. Nor scoffing at shed tears when darkness descends, quaking at the thought that light may not reappear. Understand when I need solitude, so deep in my thoughts and wish to exclude all else around me, wanting nothing to intrude. Walk by my side when days pass to next season in content happiness. Laughing and teasing like carefree children who don't need a reason. I vow, without prodding or shove. Together ~ let us fly gently as the dove ~ These, the ways I wish to be enveloped in Love. --...chanson~ "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley [This message has been edited by chansondegeste (edited 09-05-2000).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Chansie - This is a very sweet poem of love in many of its facets. You wrote it so well. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Thank you kind sir!  --...chanson~ "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
chansondegeste, Welcome to Passions!!! I don't think I had a chance to see your first posts, but I am glad I caught this one. Very nice writing. Sounds like a wonderful way to be loved!!  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Thank you for the warm welcome and warm words, Lone Wolf. Much appreciated! --...chanson~ "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
What a beautiful heart felt plea.....this was absolutely breath taking!!! Awesome work!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
chanson, a plea from the heart. . . well done, my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
butterfliesDC....Sven, thank you both.....pleased you like --...chanson~ "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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