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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2000-09-04 08:49 AM


With Long John Deer and Toerag
the competition's strong
but they need to worry
now that Kethry's come along

Long John is a writer
he posts here on this site
and Long John is a trickster
keeps me laughing half the night

Long John says he don't write, that much
his repertoire is shot
but his challenges and ditties
keep me giggling a lot

Long John has a partner
the lovely Lorelei
and he will be, chained to her
barefoot, bear behind he'll cry

If only I could make ice-cream
I'd have a better plan
I'd go and live with Kethry
be her good humor man.

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"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-


[This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 09-04-2000).]

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Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-09-04 09:33 AM


YYyyyyyeeeeeeHHHHHHaaaaaawwww...this cowboy likes a good calling out and that is what this one is.  I am chukling deep inside and smiling even bigger cause I KNOW that someone is gonna be coming back on this for sure.  I  battle of poetry for a lowly kitty kicker no less.  What could be better than that.
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-09-04 11:02 AM


Kethry better be careful! I think Loreli keeps LngJn's bare behind safely locked up!      Cute poem!
Lorelei54
Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 458

3 posted 2000-09-04 12:14 PM


Thanks for thinking "highly" of my man...but I think I'll decline your offer for him of him being your "good humor man"...it took me a long time to find this one...and I fear that there is not another like him in all the world...but thanks for the offer!! (taken good natured of course!)
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

4 posted 2000-09-04 01:27 PM


What a testimony!


Kathleen


Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
5 posted 2000-09-04 03:10 PM




    Well Done and Bravo!!!!!!!!!!      


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
6 posted 2000-09-05 08:24 AM


Thanks everyone

The gauntlet is thrown
the battle is won
so cower in fear
I'm,best under this sun.

For post and riposte
is my forte
and if you laugh
I will start a sortie

It's all good
so laugh while you may
for Kethry is taking
the crown from today.


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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