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The Wail of Words from Mime
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The Wail of Words from Mime |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Upon request, I picked up pen to write my story over-- I painted days with skies of blue and planted fields of clover. I dried my tears of wasted years each page a simple rhyme... and as I wrote, my heart just broke-- a wail of words from mime. Torrential rain-- glass sheets of pain, a storm that travels sea... The rocking boat, remained afloat, most miraculously. And at last when storm had passed, a rainbow, I did see. When then occurred these simple words: "My life is boring without me..." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ Amen, girl !  You brighten up the night ! I just love ya' gal ! Glad to see that pen stirring the midnight ink ! LOVE YOU ! ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
serenity ~ both sad and humorous,, I didn't know if I wanted to laugh or cry, so I did both,,, well said... Steve B  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh, Lady this is great!!! I love it... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Serenity, I'm soooo pleased to read this poem you penned... You have a way of expression in rhyme that truly captures the soul N heart... Thanks again for a great read! Coco |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You said it girl. You are the sunshine in YOUR life and YOU are the reason that life is at all. Wonderful write and after reading that emotional roller coaster of words I am drained. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
hi serenity ... a great read here ... your transitioning styles always intrigue ... (more please) ... |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
What's that? I can't hear you! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I dried my tears of wasted years each page a simple rhyme... and as I wrote, my heart just broke-- a wail of words from mime. a storm that travels sea... The rocking boat, remained afloat,Torrential rain-- glass sheets of pain, most miraculously. And at last when storm had passed, a rainbow, I did see. When then occurred these simple words: "My life is boring without me..." =========================== and mine would be without you as well!!!!!! and dont ya ever forget it.  YOU KNOW I LOVE THIS ONE!!!!!!!! you are so special baby... never lose sight of that.... My sweet butterfly Vante' once said to me... why cant you turn your light on your self ... as easily as you shine it on others... me thinks this applies here as well love you... *kisskiss* me PS >>Torrential rain-- glass sheets of pain,<< oohh i have such poet envy of that line...  [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 09-04-2000).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ah yes... without you, where would you (we) be..?.. Nicely penned serenn....... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you get better and better... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Torrential rain-- glass sheets of pain, a storm that travels sea... The rocking boat, remained afloat, most miraculously. And at last when storm had passed, a rainbow, I did see. When then occurred these simple words: "My life is boring without me..." Loved the poem, but for some reason the second part jumped out at me more, wonderfully written. Sit down and bargain "Until your tongues are dry If the havoc and the shame continue We'll drown you in our putrefaction" Primo Levi |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice way to sum up a life...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Want to thank everybody...I had fun with this one...e ya later, m'twin....hugs to mom...much appreciated! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
What a treat to read... wonderful poetry... |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
What a beautiful way to end the long holiday...S'en this is awesome...a weave from your heart and you found a rainbow...I think we all have one if we just look deep enough to find it. ((Hugs)) for this one!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
with a *wink* to Mike---told ya I was takin' notes...LOL...I do hope it showed, I thank you much... and Hugs for Holly...I so appreciate that coming from YOU!!!! smiles, t'nite... |
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