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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-09-02 08:11 AM


Suddenly Something

I was alone
Alone in a world of
Broken dreams and
Shattered promises
I was frozen, so cold
Shut away where pain
Couldn't reach me
But neither could
Anything else

I was cold
Unloved and uncared for
Waiting for what?
Not to feel pain
Avoid loving, avoid life
It was dark,
No lights, to cheer me
I didn't want
Anything else

I was awakened
By something suddenly
All around me
The dark dreary days
Began to take on light
I was warming
A spark ignited
Begining to see
Something began

Now I see something
Finally I believe
I believe again
My heart can feel
My pulse still race
I have a smile
There is light breaking
Down the doors of
My personnal prison

Love has entered here
With love, comes light
Freedom, and spirit
Soaring forever



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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-09-02 08:34 AM


Marsha~
Love is indeed the light that takes our
hearts into a place of glowing.
Lovely are your thoughts on this.
~*Marge*~


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Marsha
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2 posted 2000-09-02 08:50 AM


Marge thank you, for both reading and understanding. Thanks also for the inspriration.  
Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2000-09-02 11:06 AM


Very beautiful and I am glad you have found inspiration again.  You wear it well in your verse.
Marsha
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4 posted 2000-09-02 11:57 AM


Thanks Mark, it's reading the perfect poetry that I find from all you master poets that does it. And love too of course  
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