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Love Sand And Sea
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Love Sand And Sea |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Love ~ Sand And Sea Love songs of sand and sea drift endlessly in memory a tune that never ends Visions of hand in hand as we skip through the sand kicked a bag washed on shore turned out to be a jellyfish Kissed away tears laughed at silliness picked out sandspurs finally you carried me Visions turned to dreams can they not last forever? still... sweet bliss sorely missed BloomingRose |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
watch out for those jellyfish! i hope you find your bliss again..sounds like a lovely scene ..... ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lovely imagery in this one Debra  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This seems to fit the 'end of summer' mood...lovely but sad. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Thanks everyone... the memory of summers on the beach are very familar to me. This is Florida. The jellyfish part of the poem is true! Oh how it stung! Looked like a plastic bag to me... The rest of the poem... Deb |
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