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Open Poetry #9

Pay the Piper

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2000-08-26 10:37 PM

Bowls of mine
On you shall dine,

Halls of hell,
From which there is no bail,

Sins of the past,
The price you shall pay at last,

This power of yours
I shall finally rob,

Leaving you with these thoughts
For time has come to a halt.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2000-08-26 11:41 PM

"This power of yours, I shall finally rob." I like this...very powerful, very deep...keep writing my friend you just get better and better.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2000-08-27 02:04 AM

Time to pay up for someone. Lots of strength in this. Well done.....and nice read for sure.

MMoonchild
Senior Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 1715
PA

3 posted 2000-08-27 02:10 AM

definitely left me thinking, X...that piper is going to get rich ...
~~soft smiles
Maureen

JnR4eva
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 377
Bronx, NY

4 posted 2000-08-27 02:13 AM

i'm scared of you

. very strong words Xeonox...strong indeed...fierce writing

"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- rlt

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