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I Am For You
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I Am For You |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I am the quiet moment at the ending of your day The peace you seek in this harsh world I am the warmth of a distant fire That keeps you coming home I am the wind that lifts you up When your courage and strength seem to fail I am the dawn that brightens on a promise There for you, in all ways I am all these things and more Because you love me. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
this is so beautiful - there are no words |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It is a joy to be persona grata in anothers eyes and heart...James |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
How very beautiful and romantic this is, Paula....just lovely Michael |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
You continue to soar to new heights Paula, I love this! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Paula~ I like this ! 'I am the warmth of a distant fire That keeps you coming home ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Paula, a beautiful poem, really enjoyed it, I am the wind that lifts you up When your courage and strength seem to fail I am the dawn that brightens on a promise There for you, in all ways "I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Paula, This is definately very nice. I'm glad that I was able to stop and read this one you have written. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Paula ... these lovely words should be framed! Truly, beautiful sentiments, so wonderfully penned!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Your poetic talents inspires me to write. Keep it up. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
spoken like a true poet/lover. beautifully done paula. "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- rlt |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Wil...your lack of words is the highest tribute I could ask for...thank you James...yes isnt it? such a wonderful feeling this. Michael...thank you my friend...your words grace my write. EagleOne...soaring is easy when your heart has wings...thank you sir Marge...thank you sweet lady your replies are always a gift to me. Brian...it is always an honor to have you read something I have written...thank you Bill...you are always welcome here Bill, and thank you for your for your sweet reply Kit...frame away dear lady...just to think you would is an honor Xeonox...I am glad you find me an inspiration...you know I do you as well..thank you JnR4eva...arent we all? thank you sir, your words are always a joy to read. |
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