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BamaPoet
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since 2000-07-30
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Dothan, AL USA

0 posted 2000-08-01 11:51 AM


I may not have a comment
on the things you sometimes say,
because it usually takes me back
to a place so far away.

Paradise was in our hands
we'd reached our destiny,
a very special time and place
reserved for you and me.

I knew how happy you were then
I could see it in your eyes,
though we knew it wouldn't be long
until we said goodbye.

We realized our fantasy
our dreams were all fulfilled,
we didn't stop to realize
the tears we'd sometimes spill.

These special moments are in the past
we're back to being friends,
all the special things we shared
came crashing to an end.

My feelings for you haven't changed
my love is here to stay,
the memory of our Paradise
will never go away.



"If you love someone, set them free. If they come back to you, they're yours. If not, they never were to begin with."

© Copyright 2000 Mark Childre - All Rights Reserved
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