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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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0 posted 2000-08-20 11:36 AM


I'm having coffee
as I read,
peaceful words
of poetry.

The sky is blue.
Birds sing in trees.
Sweet joy is mine,
to feel such peace...

Sunday morning...
A thought, regarding,
does every family
wake up farting?

Good morning kids!
Did you sleep well?
A hug?  Oh my...
'Tis true.  Love smells.

© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
1 posted 2000-08-20 11:40 AM


ROFL!!!

this is priceless... what a great sense of humor you have

i love it!

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2000-08-20 11:40 AM


Serenity you are a character...I had a good laugh over this one....wonderful world of being a parent....what else can one say you are telling the truth.
Irie
Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
3 posted 2000-08-20 11:41 AM


This is sooooo cute!
Hehehehehehe, and yes, I think most of THEM do wake up farting!  
Very well done serenity... I love it!


~Sheri

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2000-08-20 11:42 AM


LOL...Brian does, I know what ya mean! Thanks for the giggle
serenity blaze
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5 posted 2000-08-20 12:19 PM


What I want to know is, why is it funny EVERYTIME they do it, but, no...if I try that once, then I'M disgusting?  LOL
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

6 posted 2000-08-20 02:13 PM


oooooooohhhhhh IM TELLING MOM!!!!!
your so bad....your good.
love to see ya smiling me sweet...
me

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812
Virginia
7 posted 2000-08-20 02:21 PM


"if i try it once, then i'm disgusting"....   ROFL... you have me in stitches this afternoon, lady.... hehe... can't stop laughing.... arghhhhhh
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
8 posted 2000-08-20 02:47 PM



  Ahhh....the sweet smell of family life!!!
          This was magnificent.....and almost
          made my eyes water, and not because
          I was overcome by emotions, either!
                 Great, great job!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
9 posted 2000-08-20 10:11 PM


ROFLMAO---you are so damn refreshing in your wit when you are smiling....I needed that laugh so much......thank you serenity.....still LMAO....
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
10 posted 2000-08-20 10:37 PM


LOL!!  You nut! See you can do it! It's happy, and funny    What a way to start off.  LOLOL  good one  
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