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Poetry Princess
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 28
Des Moines, IA

0 posted 2000-08-20 10:34 AM


"I wrote this a year ago when I was dating a guy who got the chance to go back with his ex that he loved more than anything in the world. But yet he didn't want to let me go."

Do it for HER

Your love for her is so strong
But what do you expect after being with her for so long
Yet I can no longer let you treat her this way
What we are doing isn't right no matter what we say
If you love her the way you say you do
You wouldn't cheat on her no matter with who
You need to lover her with all of your heart
And you'd treat her like a princess if you were smart
You've already lost her once before
So now you need to give your all and a little bit more
You need to show her how special she is
Buy her nice things and take her new places
Showing someone you care
Is more than buying them a teddy bear
You have to think of them when they are with you and away
And let them know you love them each and everyday
I understand now and I can see
You and her were meant to be
I know it will be hard to simply be my friend
But I know in time my heart will mend



POETRY PRINCESS "Love is a serious thing, and tears is all it will bring, but how do I bring it to an end, and how do I get my heart to mend?

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-08-20 10:41 AM


My my you sure have an understanding nature. All the things are true that you say here but what about you did you really love him? Good poem and I see this kind of situation quite often so I can relate to it. I wrote a poem called chasing moonbeams and I will post it as it will compare to this poem somewhat. Thanks for the read and welcome!
Poetry Princess
Junior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 28
Des Moines, IA
2 posted 2000-08-20 10:46 AM


Thank You for the response.  

Actually we had been dating for 2 years and I can honestly say he was my first love.  But I know that I can not force anyone to love me over someone else.  I knew his feelings for her and I respected that.

Thanks again,
Randi

POETRY PRINCESS "Love is a serious thing, and tears is all it will bring, but how do I bring it to an end, and how do I get my heart to mend?

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