navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #9 » Dream Sweet In Sleep Serene
Open Poetry #9
Post A Reply Post New Topic Dream Sweet In Sleep Serene Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2000-08-20 03:09 AM


inside inside where quiet dreams
in stillness
as I inhale deep
tonight I'm not afraid to sleep
tonight I sleep on perfumed sheets...
my favorite book is by my side
no weeping now, my eyes are dry.
Tonight my heart is reconciled.

I missed you.
And I did not die.

So dream you sweet,
your soul fly free...
with blessing kissed,
serenity...
I whisper you this prayer tonight...
within you, grow from tiny light,
a blaze--defense of vanity...

I wish you love.
I pray you peace.

© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
ladysixstring
Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374

1 posted 2000-08-20 03:12 AM


Comforting feeling... "tonight I'm not afraid to sleep tonight I sleep on perfumed sheets... my favorite book is by my side"  Enjoyed!!!


-jaimie
www.ladysixstring.com



Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-08-20 04:02 AM


no weeping now, my eyes are dry.
Tonight my heart is reconciled.
I missed you.
And I did not die.

So dream you sweet,
your soul fly free...
with blessing kissed,
serenity...
I whisper you this prayer tonight...
within you, grow from tiny light,
a blaze--defense of vanity...

I wish you love.
I pray you peace.
=======================

by this gift of inspiration...
you just defined serenity...
sleep sweet me twin...
poetic angels are standing watch...
love you girl...proud of you too...
me

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2000-08-20 04:09 AM


Serenity~
Shhhhhh !

'I wish you love.
I pray you peace.'


~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



spiked
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
4 posted 2000-08-20 04:10 AM


inhale slowly as you have done a wonderful job with this one.
Rich

Irie
Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
5 posted 2000-08-20 04:32 AM


After reading this I felt at peace. ~*sigh*~
How wonderful.... I'm ready to sleep now!
Bravo Serenity!


~Sheri

sarahC
Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 84
Michigan
6 posted 2000-08-20 05:45 AM


Serenity...This is sooo sweet....I love it!!! You have style lady...
brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
7 posted 2000-08-20 06:02 AM


Serenity, very beautiful and serene. Sigh, makes me want to go back to bed and dream even though I only just got up.

"Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
8 posted 2000-08-20 07:14 AM


O serene one,
I just felt I was sitting at the pond formed at the base of the waterfall again... playing, trading thoughts with the butterflies and fresh green leaves... Thanks a lot for this trip to tranquillity...

Of course, this means that this was beautiful poetry...  
----
your soul fly free...
with blessing kissed,
serenity...
I whisper you this prayer tonight...
within you, grow from tiny light,
a blaze--defense of vanity...
----

regards,
sudhir

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
9 posted 2000-08-20 07:43 AM


Serenity,
You write like your name.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

10 posted 2000-08-20 10:54 AM


and a yawn and good morning to everyone!  Thank you all for the lovely wake up call...smiles to you all, and the coffee smells great...Don't mind if I do...Have a good one today!
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
11 posted 2000-08-20 10:59 AM


Just goes to prove life goes on along with time and love....you called it right in this poem....no bitterness just contentment of recovery..great work....Karen!
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
12 posted 2000-08-20 11:14 AM


I wish you love.
I pray you peace.


You peaceful night is a blessing to us all.  I see a lot of optmism in this and a heart that is finding its peace.  Wonderfully written.

poutprincess
Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
13 posted 2000-08-21 06:38 AM


*sigh*
very comforting and inviting....enjoyed very much.
~Dawn

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #9 » Dream Sweet In Sleep Serene

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary