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ladysixstring
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 374

0 posted 2000-08-18 11:28 AM

I walk across my room at night
Only moonlight
On my skin
I find myself thinking of you... again

Remembering how it feels to be kissed by you
Remembering how it feels to be touched by you
Anywhere... everywhere

Places that ache to be touched
By hands so gentle... so kind
Places that ache when thoughts of you
Are racing through my mind

I walk across my room at night
Only moonlight
On my skin
I climb into bed alone... again

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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2000-08-18 11:34 AM

Do I ever know this feeling...sad sad sad

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-08-18 12:25 PM

oh man....do you ever fit in around here....
this is sad and lovely and true...even feels like I wrote it...hee hee...

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

3 posted 2000-08-18 12:41 PM

LadySixString,

I've known that feeling many times and you've described it very well.

Michael

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

4 posted 2000-08-18 12:53 PM

you're singing my life
this is good... you write it... it don't have to... LOL

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

5 posted 2000-08-18 01:22 PM

Oh this brought tears to my eyes. It is my life. So far away is the one I Love. Thank-you for touching my heart.

ggrn3
Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

6 posted 2000-08-18 02:16 PM

Your strumming away ladysixstring. This was a very rhythmic poem. It's also very true as many of us have experienced this feeling.

Garfield

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

7 posted 2000-08-18 02:26 PM

oh yes, have you ever joined the right place, we have all felt this at times..... believe me..it does get better....

Knight Dreams
Junior Member

since 2000-08-16

Posts 46
Austin, Texas

8 posted 2000-08-18 03:24 PM

Written with such flare I lived it through your words. Gotta go find a pillow to hug now.....This was lovely

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