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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-08-17 09:59 PM


Days Gone By

When I was 13 I liked to daydream
got rid of my toys, and thought about boys
grandma said I was a walking dictionary
always had a commentary
Oh, just to be 16...

When I was 16, kept my head in a cloud
least that's what grandma said
tried to give me her 1920's dress from a trunk
man how it stunk...
can't wait to be 21, free at last
it will be a blast!

When I was 21 grandma said get real
money don't grow on a tree
nothing in life is free...
guess I'll just marry Harry

When I was 30, clock went off at 6:00
time to get the kids out of bed
off to school to learn a golden rule
peace and quiet for a few...
least when I'm 40 kids will be grown and gone

When I turned 40, I said good lordy!
is that a gray hair I see?
can't be, guess I'll dye it, then deny it
scales showed plenty
sure would be nice to be 20...

When I was 50, life sure seemed nifty
load the camper...
hit the road Jack, thats where it's at
endless highways, endless byways
think I'll stay home for awhile

When I was 80, sure feel lazy
does anybody know what day this is?
sure wish the kids would stop by
guess I'll just throw out this pie

sure is getting late...


BloomingRose


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Mike
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1 posted 2000-08-17 10:26 PM


enjoyed your life travels viz poetry.
nicely written.

BloomingRose
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2 posted 2000-08-18 10:03 AM


Thanks Mike, my grandma really did try to give me a dress from the 1920's. She got mad when I said no! I sure miss her...

BloomingRose

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
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3 posted 2000-08-18 10:22 AM


I found this an absolute delight to read. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Juls

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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4 posted 2000-08-18 10:27 AM


What a wonderful wonderful trip you have taken me on this morning...thank you
BloomingRose
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5 posted 2000-08-18 11:04 AM


Thanks all
I have not hit the 50's so that one remains to be seen.
Now to be 80... I  have a feeling the world as we know now just won't be. At least I sure hope not. Gettin ready today...

Deb
BloomingRose

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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6 posted 2000-08-18 12:08 PM


Ah! a wonderful expression in realistic terms of life....

beautifully penned...  a blooming rose indeed

regards,
sudhir

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