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Love Me Silently
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Love Me Silently |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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Love Me Silently Oh, what a memory can do for a broken heart All I can do is relive us while we sleep apart I can hold forever now just as I held you And, close my eyes to the silence still all night through... To what was a moment that seemed to linger forever Was the hour we held our hands the first time together You loved me silently out there in the night I sigh to that minute that life seemed so perfectly right... Love me silently as when I looked into those eyes of yours And, close them again to feel me kissing you just as before And, I sigh again cause reality just gave much light ahead Love me silently as I love you was so softly said... Oh, what a memory can do for a so broken heart I need to feel what was real while we sleep apart Let us love all night long and so silently Until the sun smiles on the new day so quietly... I never knew loving so silently was true love at it's best When the night found two hearts too anxious to care to rest And, with what loving hands took such sweet time to feel I found touching you made the night so perfectly real... There's so much in a touch when there's so much to share You find feelings and reasons just lying there You know you've found your way when it takes your breath So, you just sigh to the wonder of what comes next... And, now I have waited so long to be loved silently So, love me silently as when you found your way onto me Unclothed and body to body and weight to weight Such warmth like the sun never felt this great... From the hands, to the kiss, to the touch and to us To the memory, to the moment, I can't get enough I sigh, I do, for one so glorious night So, love me this silently, always, for the rest of your life... Saun Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Sauni, this is beautiful. Spoken with such tenderness. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Silence is golden...and this is beautiful! Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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sarahC Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 84Michigan |
Wow this was awesome...I was drawn into a daydream after reading it...no joke!! Love me silently...nicely put to words!!! Thank you for this wonderfully romantic post it just sort of fit my mood!!  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sauni..... This was so beautiful and tender. You write with such feeling...... Thank you for the read... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
those memories of touch that we all feel and keep you have expressed so well in this, very good read......... |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
OHHHHH SAUNNI...what a poem, what a poem, what a poem!!!...this poem has made me relive the first night me and my boyfriend had held hands...and the look and...oh my you have evoked so many feelings in this emotional poem....this is truly a great read..I have enjoyed this a lot Thank you"my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Your words of silent love are so tender and sweet. You have reached out and touched this heart with your words and you have brought to me visions that I find so peaceful. Well written and so captivating. |
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