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Inside Forever Hearts
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Inside Forever Hearts |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Please stay upon the mention let's go beyond convention let's wave the general order and cross forbidden borders. Just let your soul demand it with wild reckless abandon inside forever hearts inside forever hearts. You say we're good together it's time for now or never this ship has finally weathered the waves from bad to better I hear the wall clock ticking I know there's nothing missing inside forever hearts inside forever hearts. I know the situation has your anticipation in my determination there is no hesitation I know your mind is whirling I know the flame is burning inside forever hearts inside forever hearts. God knows that I've been waiting for your participation you'll find a way to face him there's been no destination Please make him understand it don't let our love get stranded inside forever hearts inside forever hearts. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I know the situation has your anticipation in my determination there is no hesitation I know your mind is whirling I know the flame is burning inside forever hearts inside forever hearts. God knows that I've been waiting for your participation you'll find a way to face him there's been no destination Please make him understand it don't let our love get stranded inside forever hearts inside forever hearts. =============== OH I LOVE THIS.. a melodic work of rhyming perfection and your grace to pen the sweet anticipation of loves intensity. sing it for me E-baby  later-guitar-gator jm |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ Wow ! Talk about swirling emotions ... This one gets it done !  I like the very idea of 'inside forever hearts' ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ethome--you sure know how to take the rhythm and make it flow into a song...wonderful! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you so much Janet you have the nicest way with your comments I always look forward to them. Thank you Vaness ta gator! Thanks Marge, swirling was the way I felt when I read yours this morning...this poetry always stays inside forever hearts. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
ethome, this is so fantastic... WOW, my friend supremely done... my regards, sudhir |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
E. this one sort of pounded out it's message..I had to read a few times.. only because it made my heart want to beat the same rhythm..and well I needed a break as to let it rest a bit... ~~soft smiles and a huge sigh Maureen |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Martie for your kind words I always look forward to hearing from you. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh ethome I am just singing singing singing this one |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Sudhir for the comment much appreciated...catch you later. Maureen I was only trying to get the heart racing with the pace....thanks for your kind words. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
ethome, I really enjoyed this one...so well thought out...such good work. Michael |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh my ethome, this was certainly a pleasure to read and read and read again. ~~~Sigh~~~ Juls |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Great line! "Inside forever hearts"! Oh ethome, you've done good by this one! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
That was way too cool the way you put that all together. Beautiful work there! Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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sarahC Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 84Michigan |
Ethome...wow...I need to read your poetry more often....great writing and alot of deep emotion.... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very nicely done ethome and I love the title. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is an ethome classic for sure. The perfect cadence and rhyme for that softening flow. Beautiful words of song. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Paula, Michael and Juliet I appreciate your words so much...more than you know. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Ethome! The rhythm, the rhyme, the flow ... all exquisite! This comes together masterfully ... well done indeed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Praise, Praise, Praise my dear poet. Cannot wait for more of your very powerful works. didi |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, this is some kind of special poem. I see you hardly need me to tell you that, but just felt the need to add my praise. catalinamoon |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks Sunshine. Saunni, Sarah and Victoria I do so appreciate your comments and will be looking forward to visiting you. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Mark for your kind words |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you so much Kit, ddgoose and Cantalinamoon for your so very kind words. I appreciate them so much. |
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