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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2000-08-17 02:09 AM


  ~ Faraway Dreams~

(LONEHEART)
As visions of thee engulf my mind
I can almost feel thy silken softness
caressing my soul.
Your soft enticing sighs still linger on
within the lonely corridors of my mind
as I intreat the thoughts of thy gentle fingers
fragilely playing a melody
of lustful tunes upon my soul.
Thy fragile beauty doth seduce me.
I hear a soft breeze whispering
thy name as it quickens my every breath
and excites my soul.
Liken unto a mythical Goddess is thy beauty.
Oh Princess slender and chaste,
sensuous are thee.
Pleasure mine eyes with thy beauty once more,
that I might bask in thy delectible passion
that consumes this Knight's very soul.
The soft sweetness of thy voice stirs emotion
within mine heart that only ye shall quench.
My heart and my soul I give unto thee freely
my love.
So harken unto this plea fair maid
draw not thy curtains so quickly
Lest loves light be darkened and wisp away
unto a land of faraway dreams,
where love is of naught?

~(A ROMANTIC HEART)~
I feel thy soul crying out to me, my love,
As I read thy lovely words, I can feel thy passion, thy love touching my heart,
Your eyes,your warm embrace, I do miss so, as I entertain thoughts of thy gentle hands caressing my face,
Thy words are treasures of gold, I hold dearly to each one, Placed inside the treasure chest of my heart,
I am thy breeze, my love, for the gentle wind carries my kisses, my love to you,With every breath I breathe blowing in your direction,
These words written, so full of every breath, let not my love die of loneliness, for behold, I thy fair maid harken unto thy knights plea,
I do hear every word, every whisper,
Enchanted am I, by thy souls request,
Thy love for thee bound to this test,
For our dreams are not faraway, but close at hand,
My love, for you I will stand,
Awaiting with thy love as a light, shinning through the darkness of night,
Thy curtains will not be drawn, untill thy arms are filled with you,
Loves' light will be darkened no more, Our dreams come true,
Away I am not, nor far, close to thy heart, into every part of you I am , upon each look of every star,
Thy souls are one, together we will be,
In our land of Loves' enchanted Dreams.
So behold these words with every drop of passion I write,My brave passionate knight,
Let all who have tasted love hear these words,
That love is above and beyond all,
Love is wisdom, love is truth,
Never shall love fail, but always prevail,
This my knight, my ode to you,
My promise kept,These words I write from the bowels of thine heart,
Let thy love keep them close as we are apart,
For love is our bond, of one, not two,
My love, My words my heart does sing unto to you,
Forever my love, my darling knight,
Time nor space, nor anything cannot separate our love in Our land of Faraway dreams.......

(Thanks to my friend Loneheart for the inspiration and the first part of the poem, we had the same style of writing, so I thought it would be nice to put our talent together for a love poem...WE Don't know eachother..this is just a poem)  





[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 08-17-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-08-17 02:41 AM


A lovely plea and a stunning response...two hearts have beat as one in this romantic endeavor...James
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2000-08-17 03:07 AM


Thanks James, I wanted it to be filled with love and passion,like no other love poem.I would like to write with other poets? this was fun!
Knight Dreams
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since 2000-08-16
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Austin, Texas
3 posted 2000-08-17 08:36 PM


A lovely Duet done with style at that match.  Well done you two
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-08-18 01:43 AM


Just like two professionals up on stage.  What a sweet duet.....your styles blend with that rare meshing.......maybe you should take it on the road and do a tour.
Temptress
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5 posted 2001-03-29 05:28 AM


I'd like to use this for the next issue of Digital Passions if the authors would give me permission.   I'll be sending an e-mail along also, so you may reply there or here.
Honeybee
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Ontario, CANADA
6 posted 2001-08-02 11:28 AM



A lovely duet   Well done, you should pen more poems together~

Melissa~

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