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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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 Light filtered through trees The dawning of a new day Bursts forth from the sky |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful! Elizabeth Why ME??? |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Good job! So peaceful under that tree as the sun breaks out. marcy  yelp,catching! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
...and I see you've got the fever....hehehe Beautifully done, Rebecca! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteDove~ Lovely thoughts, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey you....what a lovely surprise this is!!! sorry I missed you earlier....and this is just perfect...love to you. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutley beautiful Angel!!!! way to go, you GO girl!!! Loved it! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Haiku rules the waves through shark infested waters Have you been bitten? ~~~ Well have you? |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sun's rays sing of dawn Beaming with new beginnings Yesterday's recourse |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Now this is a beautifully written haiku! How beautiful and hopeful it is when the dawning of a new day, a new beginning comes. I agree with you, it is like a fever, once you start writing haikus and senryus it's hard to stop. And please don't stop, I love your haikus! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thanks Elizabeth LOL Marcy! Thank you I do Denise, I do Thanks Marge! Thanks Serenity! It was a surprise to me also.  Don't worry about it....love back to ya.I'm going Angel girl, I'm going Thanks Rex, I think I might just have been LOLLovely Nan! Thanks so much Melissa! That's quite a compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed it. They are fun to write [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 08-18-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful and full of promise to a bright and wonderful day. Great Haiku |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Beautiful imagery, Becky. Truly, you have captured the spirit of the Haiku. Here's one dedicated to you about my current state of affairs...or, rather, state. Shimmer The air became sea Heat shimmering waves glimmer Across concrete shores |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Very beautiful my friend. Lovely images. Love, Juls |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful.....like nature herself |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Mark thank you! Glad you liked. LOL Ali! That's a good one! Love that last line...Across concrete shores Geez, now we know where all our greenery went. Filled with concrete. Thanks Juls. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Ruth thank you my friend! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It's just like you, dovey.....short and sweet |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You have haiku fever? That can be quite contagious.Tanka you for your beautiful Haiku Liz |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Dovey - Light filtered through trees - Man! does that bring forth memories and images!!! Perfectly opened! But, I do have one question for ya - OK? Are there any kitties trapped in those trees? *hopeful eyes* |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Oh WhtDove.... a wonderful haiku here and to think I missed this for so long!!! regards, sudhir |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lovely atmosphere at the start of day.. well done! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you Deer! I'll take the sweet part, but I don't know about short LOLIn stature, or in talking LOL Liz it sure can be. They're lots of fun Thank you LJ! Even if there were I wouldn't let you at em'. ROFL! My dog would get em first Sudhir I'm glad you enjoyed it Thank Ethome, I'm glad it started the day off that way |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
great haiku. i love these things "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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