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garsy
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since 2000-08-16
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0 posted 2000-08-16 01:52 PM


My Baby Still

My daughter’s head
Bent, still and golden over her task,
Intent on stringing beads
Holds my eyes, my heart, my mind.

It’s a love-lurch,
This tender, sweet pain I feel,
Amazing how daily it grips me,
Unexpected, always welcome,
I can never become accustomed
To the wonder of my child.

Her skin, be it satin,
Knee-scabbed, marker-stained,
Or soapy-fresh, pulls me closer
To hold, to touch, to smell.
No comfort greater to a mother
Watching her child grow
Than the hug that says
This is still my baby.

She rests still within my arms,
Eyes locked briefly, deeply,
The nursing gaze,
Her skin warm and reassuring
Against my heart.

Then, squirming, giggling,
Elbows and knees,
She pushes away
Back to her beads and her string.

My girl is growing,
And my heart protests
Each day’s new independence,
While all the while rejoicing
In her new-found skills, achievements.

This curious mingling of pride,
And joy, and loss,
In this daily surrender to time slipping by,
This is the lesson
I am learning,
Of Motherhood.


© Copyright 2000 Kristina Garswood - All Rights Reserved
JnR4eva
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since 2000-08-07
Posts 377
Bronx, NY
1 posted 2000-08-16 02:02 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS  
and what a wonderful poem you have given us here at passions...it is refreshing to read such a poem, for I myself have not read many poems of the mother's love to a child.  A totally new perspective for me to look into and i'm glad I started with this piece  


"my love is my motivation
my love is my inspiration
perception of this poem
is your interpretation"
-- me

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
2 posted 2000-08-16 02:43 PM


Welcome To Passions
I like this poem a lot, it's a new perspective for me too.  I can't wait to read more of your poems!

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