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slipknot
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since 2000-05-31
Posts 25


0 posted 2000-08-01 02:43 AM


hi Amy
so nice to see you
the answer to this
I cannot find
these past few weeks you are constantly on my mind
I love to sit and look at stars
and talk with you for hours at a time
I wouldn't of thought it would come even this far
but answer me this.
do you want more?
is this all that you are looking for?
Do you feel anything?
either way, please let me know
just sitting and thinking
this is so confusing
I would like to continue forward
but I don't know what to do
I guess I need to wait and see
what I hear from you.


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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
1 posted 2000-08-01 03:39 AM


Well now, a gem we have here. Done this type of thing many a night myself... perhaps am doing so now...Thank you!

Christopher

Jacman
Member
since 2000-06-27
Posts 291
Dwight Il, US
2 posted 2000-08-01 09:28 AM


Three reasons why I liked your poem.  Number one is that I was attracted to I by your screen name.  Slipknot is one of my favorite bands.  Number two, I was in love once with at girl named Amy.  Number three, well its a good poem.

jason

Just as soon as I belong, then it's time I disapear...
-Metallica-

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