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Close Your Eyes
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Close Your Eyes |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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Close your lovely eyes, keeper of my heart Let your mind 's imagination rove Let me guide you on a journey Let me convey to you my love Close your eyes and hear my soft words Tread different pathways to your heart Without the sound of my voicing Sense the deep emotion of my part Close your eyes and feel my presence All the warming heat you will agree The passion forge within my flesh Transmitting all our love shall be Close your eyes and let my breath flow O'er your skin let it soft caress you The silent message I'm sending Tells you gently what I will do Close your eyes, and feel my closeness Lay your sweet head upon my chest Hear the pounding there within me A Bass drum beats to a high crest By your touch it is made throbbing With a fierceness loudly it pounds Rumbling all through the heavens For with you it knows no bounds Open your eyes now, and see me Gaze deeply now into my eye See all the love that resides there Forever though all seasons fly Use your eyes watch me placing kisses, My lips lightly touching your skin Kiss here, kiss there, and kiss everywhere It's a way for love to begin Security feel in my arms As we embrace and we snuggle Soft as silk my bands of armor Keeping secure with no struggle Again I'll have you close your eyes Feel freedom and my love will last Find the confidence in knowing My strong passion now holds you fast Abiding true love, secure love. Love you've inspired, love only for you Feel strength, desire for your love Sweet and fresh as the morning dew |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
A strong and powerful emotion expressed with great feeling and warmth. Nice jon |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wil--A beautiful, inspired sensory poem, full of love's passion. I very much enjoyed reading it. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
this was very heartwarming and so beautifully worded.I can not say enough to tell you this was very sensual and loving. Keep up the good writing my friend. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Ok thats it, I'm hooked. I adore your writing! BloomingRose |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
My eyes are closed...and I tremble in anticipation of that first soft touch...lovely lovely write [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 08-16-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May I be the president of your Fan club? So well done! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Jon - Many thanks - I'm glad you liked Martie - Inspiration abounds here for me - and I am most grateful for it  Rosebud - I'm so glad I warmed your heart - Such responses as yours warm mine Blooming Rose- I do not want to be responsible for any net addictions - It is bad enough I'm 'hooked' on writing poetry ~G~ Paula- some things are better eyes closed - some wide open ~G~ stay tuned ~S~ Sunshine- I've never had a fan club - i'm extremely flattered - I only hope I can live up to your expectations Thank you -- thank you all |
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