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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2000-08-15 02:39 AM


Can I cut me open?
How sharp the knife
can slice a soul?
Can I speak my heart--
beat spoken?
Tell me now,
lest I grow cold...
Come here,
still my shaken mind...
Come here,
you were meant for me,
Come to me and know you're mine.  
and come again, come to believe,
this dance of soul...
a tale of olde...
simple faith
of love's reprieve--
Come unto me,
Gaze in belief,
allow release
serenity,
give it---give it
all to me...
release
my secrets--told...

© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-08-15 03:03 AM


ooohhhh serenity.....this hurts....BADDDD......me thinks you need a visit from your SS...

ma miller
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

2 posted 2000-08-15 08:13 AM


Hi K. ... this is beautiful ... nice style and an easy read ...
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-08-15 05:02 PM


Mark, I thank you kindly, but forgive my ignorance, but what exactly is an SS---and are you quite certain that I have one?

Mr. Miller--always a pleasure to hear from you, I thank you for your kindness.

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