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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration

0 posted 2000-07-11 08:08 AM


Next challenge, since the last was so well done! Now let's do the same topic, except this time, format the poem/prose piece as a similie!

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Poet deVine
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1 posted 2000-07-11 08:12 AM


Here's mine:







[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 07-11-2000).]

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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2 posted 2000-07-11 08:31 AM


Must it be the same piece or theme? or completely different?

regards, sudhir

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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3 posted 2000-07-12 12:41 PM


as a pain is to a neck....





Of course master...willingly even will I do this...

HAHA

K

Severn
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4 posted 2000-07-12 12:43 PM


Oh Sudhir - I believe Chris means another 'I am' poem, except using an extended simile (read simiLE C...).
Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
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5 posted 2000-07-12 08:22 AM


Kinda like 'I am the Semantic Picasso and Culinary Hound'?  Oh, wait...that's a metaphor..damn....although, if I put a 'like' or 'as' in there, it might float.  Semantic Picasso being one who creates abstracts from varied word origins, and Culinary Hound being about someone who loves to cook, but is also Year of the Dog in Chinese Astrology (1970).  Or am I really stretching things?  


Alicat, the Persnikitty

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
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6 posted 2000-07-13 12:32 PM


Ali, Ali, Ali

**S - r - e - t - c - h**





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