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I Miss You!!!
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I Miss You!!! |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
I Miss You I can feel your tears upon my cheek as the rain pours down on my face I can feel your breath on my neck as the wind whistles through the trees I can feel your warm, strong arms wrapped around me in the cold, winter night air Sometimes I can almost picture you standing next to me Sometimes I can hear your voice telling me you still love me Sometimes, in my dreams I see you in a safe place, and your happy Even if it's only my imagination it's still a comfort |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~CC~ Nice poem! I really liked this one. It's always very hard to miss someone and not know how they are. I hope that things get better for you. At any rate, you did justice to that emotion by writing this poem. AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
thank you very much Amy  |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
"even if it's only my imagination it's still a comfort" Such a suiting ending...Often times I thank God for the tangibility of my own imagination...Comfort, yes. Great poem. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I liked this poem. Its nice to know that our imaginations can comfort us. James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CrazyChick~ I like this. Keep the visions. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this, too... take what comfort your imagination gives! *S* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you have a beautiful imagination... lovely imagery and emotions in this...i relate to this one. take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
such emotion and beautifully written...I to loved the imagery |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Thank you everyone |
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paulsm Junior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 48 |
Very touching, I can relate to that Thankyou |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
After reading this,I have to say that your name just doesn`t fit. I see a kind,caring Chick with a wonderful imagination. Nice read Chick |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You've captured the dream in this poem. Hang on to it Liz |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful poem. You can feel the longing... |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Thank you everyone!!!!! Thank you RuffRider for the nice compliment |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This really touches me each time I read it..."I can feel your tears upon my cheek...as the rain pours down on my face"...lovely writing...James |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Thank You James! |
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