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The Madness |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
The Madness ------------------ Again she smiles at my pass I feel a grip upon my soul She weakens my defense I want the sin of her touch The madness always comes ... I'd sell my soul for just one night She holds a magic within her eyes I desire the sweetness of her lips Again she smiles The madness always ... I cut my hand to seal the pledge Her kiss is energy all its own I'm weak to the power of her love Again she smiles The madness ... I see the truth within her soul Her grip is tight upon my heart I know the meaning of her spell Again she smiles, the she devil Ooh the madness .... James Parker Haley (C)2000 [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 02-25-2000).] |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James: This is excellent! I really like it. You poor thing some woman's always ripping you apart!! Marina |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ooh james...the desire... the sensuality... I love this poem...its excellent...very well expresssed!!!janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
i firmly believe ther's a little madness in all of us . You expressed this well. Doc |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ooh, good one, James! Glad to see you conjured up some spirits again! Such a wonderful kind of drowing madness, is it not? A very sensual poem, I must say! I think I'll have to read this on again. "She devil," eh? Wow! Corinne |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This is devine James...an art all its own!! *excuse me while I get my heartbeat back intact!!!  *Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Thanks Marina, I'm a surviver. ooh Janet, I like your attitude. Thanks Doc, I think you right Corinne, Yes she was a devil, thing about them devils they seem to be able to change their form. Turn your back they'll sneak up on you as a little elf, or an Irish nymph... just never know. Thanks devina, just want to keep your heart pumping. Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Parker, oops, I meant to post the response I wrote on Puppeteer, here! The Irish nymph comment, I mean. And, this poem passed too fast, in my opinion. Soooo, back up to the top you go! Corinne |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Parker, this poem of yours brings a little Madness all its own... Claire |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I love how you keep ending lines with "The Madness!" It gives a very sensual, and creepy, energy to the piece -- which I'm sure is just what you wanted, anyway. Mike |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh Parker...I like  |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
yep, like this much, it portrays the man/woman attraction thing very well....great poem |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, I hate it when they pass so quickly, thanks. Clair, Mike, Ruth, and Corazon, thanks, the madness always........ Parker |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
The Madness makes us do funny things my friend. . .like jump on a plane at a moment's notice. . . Wonderful poem. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I must echo the sensual of this poem. Enjoyed much! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Sven, Martie, thanks sensualality is the madness..... Parker |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Yep - what sweet madness it is. Great poem, James. Michael |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Thanks Michael glad you like. Parker |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Well James, Great piece!! this had my eyes glued to the screen. Very Sensual! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I've had my eye on this title and finally had a chance to read it, and so glad it did not get away. It surpassed my expectations. So does the madness Liz |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Dark Angel thanks, its the madness, you'll find your self staring, BayWatch does it to me. Thanks Liz, the madness draws everybody in, a little madness in all of us. Parker |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Parker~ The madness grips me, holds me in it's spell. I think I know this madness well. Nice job. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
James, If this is madness, I'll take insanity any day! And so the wild moors call upon us, whispering winds of an emerald isle "Who can dance among you?" it asks "We dance the dance of lovers," we cry. And we cry. Cor |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Ah Marge, your mad to, its going around. Corinne, me thinks you've got that Irish madness.... a very sweet madness it is. And hearts will dance the shores of a Irish sea When the ancient Celtic songs did play and run and play in the meadows green Where hearts did meet in better days... Park.... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ahh, sweet parker, you drive me madder still! Corinne |
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RufffRyder Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143<------Over There------> |
Maddness?Mabey. Love? oh yea She must be very special to you for you to want to sell your soul just for one night. Thank`s for the read,I enjoy`d |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
What a madness and what a piece of poetry Wow The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Then the plan is working, sweet Corinne. RufffRyder, the madness wiil make us sell everything. HelmutB, thanks. Parker |
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