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just_another_fe
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0 posted 2000-02-24 02:07 PM


I MISS YOU SO MUCH
AND IT'S ONLY DAY THREE.
I CATCH MYSELF THINKING
WHERE COULD YOU BE.
I STILL SLEEP WITH MY PHONE
WAITING FOR YOUR CALL
AND WHEN I DON'T GET IT
AGAIN I FALL.
I WANT YOU TO MISS ME
BUT I DON'T THINK YOU CARE.
DO YOU EVEN REALIZE
THAT I'M NOT THERE!
WHEN I SEE YOU ON LINE
I WANT TO SAY HI
BUT I DON'T THINK YOU'LL ANSWER
AND AGAIN I'LL CRY.



© Copyright 2000 Angie - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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1 posted 2000-02-24 02:11 PM


this is sadly sweet...and I realte to this one all too well...hearfelt expression.may I send you a 'sister poet" hug(smile)
take care, janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2000-02-25 02:54 AM


~JAF~

Ohhhh I feel the sadness of this poem. Its hard as anything when you miss someone so much. And you don't even know if you come into their thoughts. BUT remember something, you are a wonderful person with lots to give. So try to smile a little, and embrace the good things life has to offer.

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

CrazyChick
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3 posted 2000-02-25 02:57 AM


I know exactly how you feel       its a horrible feeling      I wish you all the best

you did a great job!  

January Flowers
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South Carolina
4 posted 2000-02-25 04:20 AM


Ditto on the above commments!  Amazing how heartbreaking the "silence" can be.  You expressed this well.
Compgirl
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5 posted 2000-02-25 09:47 AM


I hope that loneliness is replaced with many joys. Your poem said many feelings I have often felt. Loved your poem..
suthern
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6 posted 2000-02-25 09:49 AM


I can relate... when every thought is I miss you and every breath brings another thought. *S*
SEA
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7 posted 2000-02-25 09:50 AM


J_A_F_~ I think this is so well said. Very sad. -SEA
just_another_fe
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8 posted 2000-02-25 02:13 PM


First I wanna say that you guyz really are the BEST!

Janet: I'sorry that you relate. i wish this on no one.

Aimster: thank you thats so sweet *smile* and i'll try thanx

CC: sorry that you feel it and best of luck to you also  

SEA,JF&CG: thanks

suthern: you are so right "when every thought is I miss you and every breath brings another thought"  thank you  

1 more time U GUYZ ARE THE BEST! I LOVE YOU GUYZ!

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