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Kid Pedestal
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since 2000-01-04
Posts 26
Chandler, Arizona

0 posted 2000-02-24 12:56 PM


The blindness of ones faith
Can cause deception in his mind.
Makeing his choices frieghtening
And putting his thoughts in a bind.

I'm turning a page in the chapter
Of my life,
Where love is unfound and friends
Are held tight.

Breaking away and finding my place,
To seek the passion in my heart,
The passion which I chase.

To find the symbol of my life,
The symbol of my being.
The reason for it's exsitence,
And the purpose of it's meaning.



© Copyright 2000 Adam Newberg - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-24 02:04 PM


Hi, this is the first I have seen of you work and its EXCELLENT. The emotions of this poem effect me... I look forward to more of your words. take care, janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


Kid Pedestal
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since 2000-01-04
Posts 26
Chandler, Arizona
2 posted 2000-02-24 03:54 PM


Thank You, I appreciate your response!

Kid Pedestal

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