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Of Multi-colored Things With Wings(according to Forest Green)
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Of Multi-colored Things With Wings(according to Forest Green) |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Umber burning chestnut tree Andrew draws his crayons Violet pales and turns to rose According to his plans Forest green as yet un-seen Blends into the brush While Turquoise covers up her toys And runs off with a blush Cinnamon who's always fun Decides to make the scene She takes it slow with Indigo If you know what I mean Black and Blue who've had a few Fall down to the ground While smoke of many different hues Circles all around Every flying thing it touched Was painted up brand new You won't believe it all that much But it even got "One Flew" Gray and Pink , no-one thinks , too much about those two Fed Red a grape , who with mouth agape , choked 'till he was blue Orange was peeled , his fate was sealed The whole bunch got quite stewed All but Forest who knew the scorest And stayed well out of view And to this day by flowing streams He tells this tale in waking dreams Of multi-colored things with wings And the one they call " The Crayon King" [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 02-22-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 this poem is BEAUTIFUL your an artist with your pen!!! take care, janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. your my inspiration, your my fire... your words fill me with poetic desire. Every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Well, Dr. Moose it's good to see your still around. You missed a lot you know, but things will be back to normal before you even know. Interesting poem you paint here. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dr.Moose~ This is absolutely adorable. I am enjoying what you write.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
For a girl with a crayon obsession, this is perfect! So creative! I love it!  *Krista Knutson* "Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~ |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Against my better judgement I'm going to bump this up once to see if "The King" catches it this time Doc |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderfully done!!! Must have been hard to do too! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Lovely poem, full of color. Enjoyable reading Liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I think I saw the "The King" at the zoo the other day trying to get his crayons back from the monkeys. You are so colorful sir Doc. and I liked the colorful characters in your poem. |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
What a colourful, creative, royal poem Doc. I'll bring this up for you, so our King will catch it this time. Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou |
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Justin Consistant Junior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 10my mind creates the place |
What a poem Doc. never realized you to have so many colors in your bag. To bad the Nurse can't see your colors but I saw her on the news in the Pub spouting something about a Rocky Ledge. I'm not sure about her lately, our you all safe in here? |
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ONE FLEW OVER Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 55Cuckoos Nest |
Dr. Moose I'm here in splendid colors like these orange pants with purple flowers, how about this fuchsia shirt with black stripes? The black seemed to match with the stove pipes I'm wearing casually with this green hat on my head. I have my turquoise socks laid carefully out on the bed, but the best of all is the red with white polka dotted underwear which underneath I conspicuously have hidden a pink bow knotted. |
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Justin Nuendo Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 86Ozzz |
Shhhhhhh.....Don't ya dare tell 'em all, but I kinda love this one.....gonna tell me a bedtime story tonite ? |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Enjoyed the humour and waxing creativity in this piece... ~ Claire |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Doctor Moose, I was speechless By the colors you did draw I laid down all my crayons And stood there in utter awe Never have I seen such shades Within my Crayola Box Only once I eyed such hues On a Scotsman's argyle socks Doctor Moose you have my thanks For this rainbow of wonder The pot of gold at it's end Are the responses under |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Rather than reply seperately , my thanks to you all . Glad you liked . Doc |
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Justin Nuendo Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 86Ozzz |
Hiya Doc, long thyme no see. Where are ya these day ? We sort of need ya in the "stute ya know, or are ya only doing fancy hopitals these days ? It don't matter to me, but somethin' very weird goin' on with Kindheart and Crachet. They may need medical advise, so uhhh if it's not too much to ask and ya can find some spare thyme......will it help if I say please ? OK PLEASE ???? PLEASE ???? PRETTY PLEASE PLEASE ? Well, gotto go...I was really looking for those magic books, seen 'em anywhere ? Better check the bathrooms, ya never know with all these loonies round here. See ya around Doc.  |
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