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Strangling Slowly
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Strangling Slowly |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Verses of love Have evaded me for ages. It seems they may be fleeing Forever. Could it be something in me? Flowing spirits surround me Their battle scars stitched, Healed by others' words and love. Why have I left This field of destruction Trailing behind me; Haunting my thoughts? Did I play too long? My punishment for doing Unto others what they have done to me? Destined to never know What he could mean to me. Bound by this circle Strangling me slowly. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"Did I play too long? My punishment for doing Unto others what they have done to me? Destined to never know What he could mean to me. Bound by this circle Strangling me slowly"... wow...sonjes...this is a powerful statment. I love the last lines...great job!! janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. your my inspiration, your my fire... your words fill me with poetic desire. Every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Thank you, Janet Marie. Your replies always "lift my spirits" so to say. You and my poetry, very therapeutic.  I need it, it seems I having trouble "breathing" lately. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
sonjes, excellent poem. Hope you're feeling better soon. {{Hugs}} |
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