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Path Of Life.... |
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Verma Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 80Midlands, England |
Path of life I wake each morn’ and walk my life, And hope my path don’t lead to strife, The decisions which I choose to make Affect my mood and the path I take I wake each morn’, take dog for walk, And hear people moan as they talk People look at me as I pass them by I stare right back and wonder why? And then one day as I walked my life I met my daughter, son and wife I saw the house where I would live The wedding ring that I would give I continue on and walk life some more Another day, another door, My children grow and leave their home And all the safety they have known Then as they grow, they bring to me, A grandson to bounce upon my knee The feeling of walking this life through time Makes me say “Thank you” for this life of mine ~~STEVE~~ January 2000 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very nice work... nice to see someone grateful and content...nicely expressed emotions! take care, janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. your my inspiration, your my fire... your words fill me with poetic desire. Every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Steve, your poem brings the appreciation of one's blessings into the light this morning. I enjoyed reading it  |
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mystery Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 79 |
This poem is enough to make the most depressed person on the planet enjoy life, Life has a mysterious cycle, you never know what's to come, or how it will turn out, your's seems quite pleasant. nice work |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
We are so blest in our lives, we just need to be able to see that. Nice work. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Steve~ This is lovely and nostalgic. I think your reflections mirror the thoughts of many of us. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
thanks for sharing this most delightful poem it was very enlightening... |
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seti@home Junior Member
since 1999-11-28
Posts 24 |
very well written! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sounds like you've chosen the right path!! This is lovely Steve!! Denise |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Sounds like a nice walk. Nice poem. |
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CherylLynnMckee Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 215 |
Lovely poem...heart warming..thank you for sharing it..I enjoyed it much. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I love those kinds of walks. We take those when we look through the photo albums. Well done Liz |
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