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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2000-02-08 12:52 PM


Dark of night
see the poet write
cursed by numbers plain
too few they say
to know the world
too few to know the pain

But what age is too young
to hurt
to love
to feel

Who’s to say a poet
has to be a sage
to hurt
to love
to feel

Who’s to say a poet
can’t be fifteen
to know
what’s real

Who will listen
to the poet song
whether young
or old
or right
or wrong

And in the forum
we call Teen
resides the poet's pain
and love
and life
Unseen

I know the Open Forum is for everyone and the Teen Forum is for Teens. But today, I issue the challenge to you all to go to the Teen Forum and read and reply to a few poems there. We were all in their place at one time...hoping that we would be read..that someone would understand..that through responses we would receive validation. Your words will have a powerful effect. Please... Thank you.



[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 02-08-2000).]

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Mistikman
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA
1 posted 2000-02-08 12:55 PM


Speaking as one who resides now in both Open and Teen forums, I must say that the teen forum is greatly in need of a little push. Many in the forum post poetry, but no replies, leaving the average number of responses to about 3 or 4 per poem, as opposed to 10 in nearly every other forum. If we go in and respond to the poetry there, maybe those there will follow your lead and begin posting their own replies more often.

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
2 posted 2000-02-08 12:12 PM


I'll be there soon Sharon =)  

 Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin*


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 2000-02-08 01:04 PM


You have the grandest way of issuing a call  
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
4 posted 2000-02-08 01:10 PM


You know, I am not so old that I do not remeber well the frustration of being a teen.  That no one seemed to want to hear what I had to say - that no one took me seriously.  That no one cared to guide me from these emotions left serious scars on me emotionally.  I think we all could stand to pay a little more attention to the works in the Teen Forum.  Some of them are darn good, too.  But most of all we should at least hear what the voice of tomorrow is saying today.  Their points of view we can't afford to overlook.


Michael

Ted Reynolds
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 331

5 posted 2000-02-08 07:36 PM


Thanks for the suggestion, Poet DeVine.  I've just spent a mere 15 minutes "down there," and found poets (including Tamma, rich-pa, Master, the ones I happened to hit in that short time) that we'd all be pleased with "up here" . . . and of course, they probably soon will be.  But let's let them know we're here now, and that *they* speak to *us* too.  Good move, DeVine.
RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
6 posted 2000-02-08 08:23 PM


I'm too tired right now but I will listen/share in the morning

As a teenager, I would have loved this place, to know so many people understood, would have made so much difference...

I wonder how many recognise, outside of communicators, (i.e. here)  the value in sharing and putting emotions into words and although as a teenager I wrote, I wonder who would have understood...  

Such a way of understanding you have, Sharon..  < !signature-->

 The grape passes through the press to yield wine.
Your life must pass through the press of passion and pain to yield the wine of wisdom..



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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
7 posted 2000-02-08 08:44 PM


Directions to get to the Teen Forum -

Exit through the Open Door - Turn right in the Alley - proceed to the end of corridor - Go up the stairs, turn left... Enter through the Linked door that says Teen #2....

or...

Try the drop-down menu, "Go To..." at the bottom of this page...  


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Majestic
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 264
houston, tx.
8 posted 2000-02-08 09:28 PM


woohoo...on the way....(should be fun)....ah..quit frowning..i didn't mean it like that..hehe

 "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~



WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
9 posted 2000-02-08 11:36 PM


Well, when ya put it like that, it's just so hard to say no.  Wonderful verse Devine!

So very true Michael!

 <*\\\><

When you can't make up your mind
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
What Would Jesus Do?

Paul Hoekman
Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>
10 posted 2000-02-29 11:38 PM


I'm on my way!

RufffRyder
Member
since 2000-02-25
Posts 143
<------Over There------>
11 posted 2000-03-01 01:04 AM


Right behind ya Paul

Could someone please help me up?
Hello?


Meadowmuse
Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263

12 posted 2000-03-01 01:14 AM


Excellent suggestion (and graceful manner of doing so) Poet deVine.


Paul and Rufff, you boys are hilarious!

~ Claire

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
13 posted 2000-03-01 02:28 AM


I'm ready to take a look, I'll be there soon.

 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

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