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Chris Goodman
Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 92
Issaquah, Washington usa

0 posted 2000-02-20 02:44 AM


Has it been ten years
& six months?
the last thing I remember
was the suitcase in your
trunk!
the man who sat at the
wheel to take you
to the beach
i never heard another
word
it left me
in mystery
i called months later
to see how you were
a friend of mine indeed
but when you spoke
you cloaked the
the truth and the
words came out so easily
to never ring your name
again would be something
of a wish, but the thought
of you is forever in head
and something to get use to
i will leave you alone
but only in that person
to sit and drink by
myself is something of
rehearsal
i never said that things die slow
i only said i cared
but life to you
is just a joke
so go away my dear
it has been long
it has been free
it has been misery
to find myself upon your stairs
and laughing about
so hysterically
i drank and smoked
while you blasted the twins
i cut into two
with the song of rememberance
please tell me you are over it
now
forgive your friend
find a way how
doing you wrong with all my lies
i escaped the hell hole
for something worse
something on the inside
it will take a razor to leave
a lifetime to heal
and not another friend
will ever replace the faith I have in Phoebe.< !signature-->

 Blue Moon


[This message has been edited by Chris Goodman (edited 02-20-2000).]

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INclan
Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
1 posted 2000-02-20 08:06 AM


Chris,
an interesting composition...true life?  I suspect that each of us carries a little of a Phoebe around with us.

INclan

Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2000-03-09 02:12 PM


TGTBATB

Too
Good
To
Be
At
The
Bottom



Miss.Queeny
Junior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 22

3 posted 2000-03-09 02:17 PM


Very nice. And very truthful ? Probably. The title really caught my name.
Keep up the good work...

Love, Peace and Apathy...MISS.Q xxx

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