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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Unknown Unknown too unknown we are born. A light for a moment then gone. No chance for an ambience, It's Silence to violence to silence. From earth to earth is the thrust. And from dust to dust we must. For in between lies caprice, The ambergris, of altarpiece. Neither saint nor sinner is born. Neither looser or winner to mourn. The answer lies beyond the stars And the doors are open, ajar. We are partial of a sequence, Part and parcel of ordinance. We dance upon the fickle of chance, In the nuance of a trance. If such is dearly and really the case, Then I sincerely question my place. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
as for the beauty of the poem...you belong right here in PIP, Mr.Sy and don't forget it!! lol As to the bigger question, don't we all wish we knew??? Just smile poet!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is wonderful Sy , I enjoyed reading it alot |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
I've always thought we were here for a greater purpose...that we're all given a gift. Some realize the gift and choose not to use it. Others relish the gift and make a difference. While others never see it...are oblivious to it's power. As to what lies beyond, I have it in my heart that it is more grand than we can possibly fathom. Now see what you do? You always have me thinkin'! Stop it!! LOL (Don't you DARE!!) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Devina, I'm not only smiling but LOL. Thank you for the nice comment. *L* Whiskey, Thank you for the wonderful. You are pretty wonderful yourself. *L* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sally, Our beliefs are our dreams and yours are sweeter then mine, *L* Sy Thank you for the comment. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour- What a 'thinker' this is. Crafted with mastery from the master of the mysteries of life. So well-done, sweet man. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, It's far beyond Jupiter or Mars The answer lies beyond the stars But in the sum of everything The answer's in a sparrow's sing An exquisite poem A beautiful read Love ya Liz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 02-08-2000).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
If such were the case, I would be questioning my place too, Sy. Good poem - excellent point made! Michael |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Life as it's best A hollow sound came from my chest As all the air i stored had left I red from a U to e with holding awe such piece there Sy that I saw You never fail to cling my mind The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Sy, Im always questioning my place, everywhere I am! This is a great poem though! *hugs* Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I never, ever question your place when your words do me embrace, but thank the powers that be that your words will live for eternity. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour, you write so beautifully. I agree with Sally, there is so much wonder, so many questions. I love thinking about it all. I feel connected to a higher power but the knowing how escapes me. My Mom and I like to toy with different theories, mostly making up our own. This is a great 'thinking' poem. Thank you for sharing it! -SEA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, What a beautiful comment. *L* Elizabeth, You make the sparrows sing, For me they only chirp. Love Sy Michael, Thank you for the excellent. Helmut, a wonderful comment, thank you. Echo, Thanks for the great and hug. Sunshine, The way you say things always facinates me. *L* Sea, Keep making the theories up, it's good excursion. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sy, I enjoyed the composition of this piece...both in sound and substance. The unknown is good for us...it gives our minds a playground. Claire |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"I sincerely question my place" as well on occasion, Sy - Nicely done, my friend |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Ah, to question is to be alive to question. Very nicely done my friend. Good read. |
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