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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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A voice sooths my senses it reaches deep inside, I hear the words but it’s the song that quenches this Saharan tide. Like an undercurrent of the ocean’s roar, some mystical lure, alluding to much more. When we’re face to face some distant memories, of another space and age, are what my mind sees. In that touch of hand some familiar gesture, sends my spirit to soar, my heart to enrapture. Now I know what is meant by songs of deja vu all becomes clear, in these images of you. © 2000 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 02-18-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Exquisitly beautiful, as always, Corinne! Denise |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
The heart beats slowly at the softness of your poetry. Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Denise, you are always so kind! Parker, you speak in prose and poetry, in riddles and in rhymes, somehow these words speak to me, visions of northern climes. Cor |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, It seems you have been touched by love. Beautiful poem. *L* |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
very beautiful Corinne... Chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I see you have a gentle heart Your poetry has a very special art reflections of your face words wraped around with grace Very nice poem The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is a beautifully written and expressed poem, I love it. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ You let your heart speak outloud. Beautiful. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Seymour, you are one perceptive poet! Grimm and Lost Dreamer - thank you! Marge, I shall try! Thank you (smiling) Helmut, thank you for the lovely poetic response. This place is so uplifting! Corinne |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh how very beautiful  |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
and you are the Sweet Dream, sweet Corinne. Parker |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Another beauty...love it Corinne! K'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful, Corinne. Your talent is exceptional. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hoot, Balladeer, Severn, thank you! Sweet Parker, thank you, again! Corinne |
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